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sue

there once was a boy named sue
he didn't have a clue
he ran around
with his pants down
and never wore underwear too

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  • Lanasaur
    February 2, 2009
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    lol

    this is funny thanks for sharing
    xxlana

  • Nobodysboy
    January 31, 2009
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    lol my nephews middle name is Sue,, it's weird but true.. your poem was cute