A world of light.
Each part gives
its unique spirit,
seen and unseen,
in harmonious
offering.
A radiant symphony
of life surrounds us…
and the artist in each
of us sees the beauty…
and adds our light
in thankful supplication.
Author notes
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: Author Unknown
40 words or less
Critical Comments Always Welcome
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I adore that picture,such beautiful colors!
I don't get why this poem didn't find its way into the finalists list for I adore it!
Take care!
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Excellent Work
You have captured a lot of beauty in the carefully selected words...it flows so naturally but resonates with unique streams of thought. I loved this so much, friend. Congrats and best regards!
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Ah! Beautiful as always, you bring the best out through your words and make emotions burn. I enjoyed this. Thanks for joining and good luck.
Much love
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A delicate write Kay. I love your talent for that. Beauty is in the the eye of the beholder. As well as it is taken for granted. All too often passed over by selfishness. A splendid write.
Keep penning
Ocean.
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a very lovely observation~
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This Is simply beautiful
All the best In the contest
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