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Deadly Quilt

There once was a quilt like no other,
that instead of warm, it would smother.
Deadly heirloom for sure,
its evil quite pure,
beware and don't run for its cover!

A contest entry

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  • Lanasaur
    February 9
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    Hehe

    i realy like this its very funnny. Nice one!


  • penman gold member
    January 31
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    Wonderful

    What a great creation. So very funny. Best of luck in the contest.