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Valentines Day

Waking up in the morning
seeing that face.
waiting for a hi
but just left without a warning.

I got up to look around
all i c is roses.
the thought of love roaming
with all my blood flowing.

found a card on the table.
& then looked what it said,
i read it very slowly
the letters drawn with red.

it said happy v-day
4ever we can be.
I promise to never hurt u
but only if u promise me.

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  • A floatingleaf silver member
    February 1
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    An interesting write, love is all around us...best of luck

  • Thor-201
    February 1

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    This is delightful! I would prefer if you used full words, but that is a personal preference. A young lady with a lot of talent. Keep writing!