Waking up in the morning
seeing that face.
waiting for a hi
but just left without a warning.
I got up to look around
all i c is roses.
the thought of love roaming
with all my blood flowing.
found a card on the table.
& then looked what it said,
i read it very slowly
the letters drawn with red.
it said happy v-day
4ever we can be.
I promise to never hurt u
but only if u promise me.
A contest entry
- Funny Valentine by A floatingleaf.
1000 points, ended February 1, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any Comments, I typicly know it is horrible!!!
Comments
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An interesting write, love is all around us...best of luck
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This is delightful! I would prefer if you used full words, but that is a personal preference. A young lady with a lot of talent. Keep writing!


