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Booty Call

Blinded,

My hand hovered

Dowsing for the treasure

Laying lost at my side -

The strapping trove of reveries

Concealed by a shroud

Of sleeptime darkness.

A contest entry

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  • saddie23
    March 7

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    good

    I was looking forward to see the words in the prompt used. Thank you for coming to the contest. Saddie23


  • Kathraina silver member
    February 18

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    Interesting piece.
    I don't know why but it kinda scares me lolz
    Bravo!
    Thanks for entering

    ♥ Kathraina

  • OldHatAndCat
    February 1
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    Beautifully written!

    Good luck in contest and best wishes. Keep writing! KJC