Dawn plays
shadow games
across my form.
Sleepy eyes ponder:
Will it know…
…passion?
…nurture?
I burrow back
under covers.
Author notes
It's always the right time for questions... answers come only when we are ready 
Prompt: Strange Questions (picture)
Picture Credit: http://m0thyyku.deviantart.com/art/strange-questions-111320751
20 Words
enigma - a saying, question, picture, etc., containing a hidden meaning; riddle.
A contest entry
- Quickie Time # 3 by phoenixonfire.
400 points, ended February 1, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
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Oooh, so short yet damn good. I love how you played with light and shadow in this poem, and such great chose of words, as always.
Congrats on the shiny
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I really like this poem!! There are so many questions an each having its own emotion and story!! The last line is withdrawl that could be explained in many ways! Well done!
Thanks for entering and good luck!!
~pri
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A great take.. different, interesting.
I really like it, very well done.
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Very interesting take on the prompt...so deep with many interpretations to ponder on!
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As always, you have managed to interrogate the prompt with extreme prejudice! Beautifully penned with pondering and vivid imagery and alliteration. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp
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this has interesting imagry, a lovely use of words! I like this a lot, good luck in the competition.
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