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Home Bound

Shadowed in moonlight,
petals gently descend
shielding the man
hidden behind folded truths.

Innocence forgotten;
Kept in time,
by ticking of an egotistical clock
echoing off the wings
of a passing hummingbird.

Hear sounds around you;
whispering flutter dampened
however soft by falling leaves.

His touch captures transparent light,
escaping your arm from grasp;
flowers grow in the wake
beneath the surface,
cracking the mask
as forever is tossed aside.







Author notes

Josephine Wall~http://s127.photobucket.com/albums/p156/creddy2/?action=view¤t=967.gif

Flower petals~http://a-nessessary-studio.deviantart.com/art/quot-Petals-Arose-quot-49211726
Leaves~http://dogeatdog5.deviantart.com/art/Leaves-57694403
Humming bird~http://diamondstwinkle18.deviantart.com/art/Humming-Bird-28157567
Soil~http://dianafernandes.deviantart.com/art/Soil-87101916

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  • mountain-woman
    February 20

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    Very Good

    I like the flow of this poem you wrote and think you did well with the prompt words. All the best in the contest

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    January 31

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