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The Days Hope




Hope is the thing with feathers,
the soul unto itself,
without the fear to justify.

Admitted scarcely to itself, it may be,
between eternity and time,
of all the souls that stand to create...

Surrender is a sort unknown,
superiority to fate,
so we must keep apart,
and dream the days away.







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Emily Dickenson Cento



Hope Line 1
XV Line 1
Too Much Line 16
The Goal Line 5
Bequest Line 7
Choice Line 1
Saved! Line 9
Superiority To Fate...Line 1
In Vain Line 45
The Grass Line 18

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  • Amera gold member
    February 2

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    I had no idea that this was a cento until I read your notes. How you can fit poetic lines together so well is a true gift.

    Love,
    Amera♥

  • A-muse-in-writer
    January 31

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    This one is well created, took me a few reads to grasp the meanings, lol of course I got interrupted several times.


  • penman gold member
    January 31
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    Excellent

    Wow, amazing. Such a beautiful write. So well written. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Desire gold member
    January 31

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    Wow~

    Beautiful Brevity~ this is Inspiring~ Want to read more You are so darn good at these Precious One Woot!!
    Centos give me the at times
    My head swells with line this and that when I try to pen~ but You versed this with ease

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Voice~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes always
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~