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My Thoughts Flowed Perfectly

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I wrote something today
while you were away
something I thought
would be hard

Every word came out right
no blockages in sight
every word flowed
like a beautiful waterfall

Something I have never done
because there was no perfect one
these words stored up
for years, deep inside

When the day is finally here
I will share each word with you , dear
trying to let you know
just how much I love you so

~Tisha Rene~

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  • owlishhunter
    February 5, 2009

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    I sit here and wonder to myself, just who are you writing about? Perhaps it's another fantasy piece... or maybe a dream? What would it be like if that man actually existed, huh?

    I love you, baby!


  • sevnsyn silver member
    February 2, 2009
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    Yes even more beautiful knowing it is yours!


  • sevnsyn silver member
    February 1, 2009

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    This is beautiful Vampy..Knowing you wrote it about you and your life makes it that much more beautiful. It is always a pleasure reading your work..But this one pleases the soul! As always I wish you well and wonderful things.


    • vampira1665 silver member
      February 2, 2009
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      Well, you know me....90% of my work is either written with my life in mind or something that is to come or has been!

      More work will show what I "know" from days of old or days to come. But I will also keep writing my lovey dovey fantasy pieces as well. I really do need to get back to writing. I hardly ever write any more.

      Hugs,
      Vampi

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