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Painted


Dry-brushed dollops
of cadmium smears
with a touch of quinacridone rose

your neck makes for the smoothest
of canvases.

My masterpiece.

Author notes

I went rummaging around in my box of oil paints to find ones that matched my lipstick

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  • The Fun House gold member
    February 22, 2009

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    I wouldn't alter this in the least. It is very well written and I love the metaphoric quality. Excellent job writing this one.