The doorbell rang with bells
you looked around at shelves
toys,broken and mended
hearts old and unattended
you went to the old reception
tlooking forward to conception
you ordered the usual heart
the one that had fallen apart
The lady said it was mended and sold
to some man who seemed quite bold
you wished it hadn't happened so fast
but there was nothing you could do.Alas!
You went around town looking for me
wondering where I could possibly be
you visited every corner of town
to know if I had been around
You walked many a miles around,
bare feet on hard ground
shoes worn out ,tattered at bend
you decided, it too needed a mend
You returned to my long forgotten store
to see if I had been there any more
the lady said you were too late,
and it was your written fate.
You walked across the store feeling mellow
climbed down to the level below
there lay a shelf with all I had given you
including my heart,pieced together with glue.
you walked through day and night
keeping out of everyone's sight
you could face no one but a heart
that was lost in the galaxy's tart
you had finally understood
and I knew sometime you would
I just had to wait until this time
when you beheld your own mind
I can now rest in solace
holding a silence in my face
with a smile and a thought
of what you had bought
In my shop of Broken Hearts And Other Pointy Objects......
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this is very good i like it,
im rora i seen you on my cosuins (kura1994) page and thaught id check out one of your poems. -
I like this!!!!
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thnk u !
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"The galaxcy's tart" (?) I fun romp of a poem, nicely done and made me smile most braodly... bravo!!!
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you know how the galaxy luks like a cinnamon role
...well..one heart was lost in it and could neva be found ....more like a heart lost sumwhere is the galaxy's tart... get me ?
anyway ..thank u for the wondrful comment ...good luck to u in life !
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i like that. the title first caught my eye, and the whole idea was very unique. the rhyming made me laugh. it was dark, and yet whimsical. very rare. really well done. i love this:
I can now rest in solace
holding a silence in my face
with a smile and a thought
of what you had bought
In my shop of Broken Hearts And Other Pointy Objects......
it's cute in a twisted way...
good job. thanks for entering in my contest.
good luck -
wow
this was amazing
great job
i loved it
thankyou for entering this in my contest good luck*you dont need it though*
xXalyXx
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Such a constant writing style, i really like the way you worded everything. This poem is very sad and i do hope everyone someday find love even if its from one who hurt you...thanks for entering GL.
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thanks kai !
u too
=D
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catchy title thank you for entering
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