You text me with a cheeky comment
And I reply in the exact same manner
But as soon as you don’t text back, I know it’s because of her
And reality hits home, fast, hard and oh so painfully
Your name comes up in conversation
With those closest to me
And the same old question appears
“Don’t you feel guilty? He’s got a girlfriend”
They all tell me how wrong this is
And how he isn’t trustworthy
“Just look at his history” they state
But my god, they don’t understand
My heart’s telling me
To take a chance on you
And my head’s telling me
To run away and let you be
And after everything we’ve both been through
Even I under estimated how hard this could be
And I just wish
There was a simpler answer than the one I’ve got at the moment.
Author notes
Please do me ONE favour...when commenting this, do not make it about the content of this poem but make it about how well the poem is actually written or how I can improve it. The situation is something I need to work out myself.
Comments
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I find the imagery is well done... I do not really know what to say here.. beside that I hope you can figure this out... I found this write a little heart breaking, and the emotions really touched me!!
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I liked this it has great flow and great story line, you expressed your feelings well and clearly I thought it was a great write
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the form was fine, it flowed nicely, i thought i was reading a story of a broken heart so u portrayed that well.
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big favour there hun.
its good, but dont be afraid to write longer stanzas or longer poems for that matter....
people have no right to tell u what to do, they can only advise... xxx love always sweetie sky xxx
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