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Lights Of Peace (silver)

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And peace will reign across the land
When all the world joins as one hand
To rid what's left of hate and greed
No longer will we sow those seeds
For in serenity we'll stand.

Light a candle, together band
Tranquility now in demand
One light's another to succeed
        And peace will reign...

As more are lit the glow expands
With darkness banned at our command
New understanding will concede
That life cannot be left to bleed
A world of trust will now expand
            And peace will reign...

Author notes

Well I can wish!

Rondeau
A Rondeau is a French form, 15 lines long, consisting of three stanzas: a quintet, a quatrain, and a
sestet with a rhyme scheme as follows: aabba aabR aabbaR. Lines 9 and 15 are short - a
refrain (R) consisting of a phrase taken from line one. The other lines are longer (but all of the
same metrical length).


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  • Frogzter gold member
    February 8

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    This is beautiful and truly does give the reader much to ponder afterward. Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent with us!

    Blessings and best wishes,

    Frogz


  • Frozentearz
    February 8

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    Very nice work here Alice
    you also have given us something deep to ponder with in and great form...Amazing work as always
    Blessings,
    Frozentearz


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    February 6

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    You can what? Write another form, Idontfeckingbelieveit!! Geez woman give the rest of us some of that talent. I lvoe this one as always. Best to you in the contest


  • Ken-Maverick
    January 31

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    Lovely sentiments here my friend,
    that second stanza was just brilliant.
    All the best to you in the contest


    Ken

  • Bob Fox
    January 31

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    Darkness

    The prevailing wind of hate seems to grow ever stronger as our world closes in on us. I pray your wonderful words are heeded.

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