When all the world joins as one hand
To rid what's left of hate and greed
No longer will we sow those seeds
For in serenity we'll stand.
Light a candle, together band
Tranquility now in demand
One light's another to succeed
And peace will reign...
As more are lit the glow expands
With darkness banned at our command
New understanding will concede
That life cannot be left to bleed
A world of trust will now expand
And peace will reign...
Author notes
Well I can wish!
Rondeau
A Rondeau is a French form, 15 lines long, consisting of three stanzas: a quintet, a quatrain, and a
sestet with a rhyme scheme as follows: aabba aabR aabbaR. Lines 9 and 15 are short - a
refrain (R) consisting of a phrase taken from line one. The other lines are longer (but all of the
same metrical length).
In a list
A contest entry
- ~ Image prompt~ by Frozentearz.
750 points, ended February 12, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please Tell Me What You Think
Comments
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This is beautiful and truly does give the reader much to ponder afterward. Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent with us!
Blessings and best wishes,
Frogz -
Very nice work here Alice

you also have given us something deep to ponder with in and great form...Amazing work as always
Blessings,
Frozentearz
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You can what? Write another form, Idontfeckingbelieveit!! Geez woman give the rest of us some of that talent. I lvoe this one as always. Best to you in the contest


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Lovely sentiments here my friend,
that second stanza was just brilliant.
All the best to you in the contest
Ken

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Darkness
The prevailing wind of hate seems to grow ever stronger as our world closes in on us. I pray your wonderful words are heeded.






