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un rhyme

I’ve hardly ever tried this
As rhyming not my thing
But it’s hard for me to dismiss
The points within the ring

So what the heck lets do it
I’ll do the best I can
I may not be an English Brit
But I’m one hell of a fan

I think it’s the sexy accent
It gets me all mashed up
Tongue tied and all tormented
I feel unlike a yup

Back to all them points though
Do I have a chance in hell?
If I give you all a peep show
Not a whisper will I tell

This you have my word on
As a once unrhyming writer
If I should find myself has won
You’ll find my methods less then biter

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  • masterblaster gold member
    March 6, 2009
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    Hi, this made me smile, if only the meter had been good. and the grammar needs a little work.Di


  • Ti Amo Te Quiero
    January 31, 2009

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    Nice job. For someone who doesn't exactly writes rhyme, it had a nice rhyme and flow in it Good luck in your contest. Keep writing ya!! Cheers!!