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Personified Computer

Ouch! Your fingers hurt me
You're taking away my beauty
my numbers are fading


( my feelings for you start to grow )


Ew! I'm all wet now.
Why did you drink that coffee near me?
My beautiful skin is destroyed -

Because you didn't pay attention!


( I think about you all of the time )


Gross. Don't touch me.
Why did you drop your food on me?
I'm all sticky now.


( butterflies in my stomach when we talk )


Hello? It's been a few hours.
Why aren't you here?
Turn me on. I need you. I miss your fingertips.


( you showed me another world & now I worship you) 

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  • Mirthryl
    March 30, 2009

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    I had never considered what my keyboard might be "thinking!" "Turn me on. I need you. I miss your fingertips." (Oh-oh!) Delightful personification.


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    March 3, 2009
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    I love it.


  • Shari-Lei gold member
    January 31, 2009

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    I actually really like this.
    It's effective and quite amusing.
    A love affair indeed


  • suseann
    January 31, 2009

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    This might be in part reason for that great new age divide devoid of communing with life outside the "box" literally.Just kidding. Only my own reflecting on the subject. This is a fun piece on reflecting the relationship we as members of an information age have been blessed or cursed with. Yet how can knowledge increased be a curse you ask? Or not!  Very inventive idea you've scribed here Poetess.Certainly had me thinking.


  • Painted-Rose
    January 31, 2009

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    something I never really thoguht abought.. It's actually..really.. Cool!

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