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To grasp, constantly, for an opulent question to continuouly discuss...



Thank God, Friday came and others quit their cunning deception.

They got chastised for arguing over their cozy, down quilt.

Today got cold, from Atlantic Ocean, to quiet, Costa Del-ray.

Constantly delaying, the Queen forgot to go for official check-up.


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  • aboomer silver member
    January 31, 2009

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    lol - definitely a fun read! Not quite sure how this was done, letter wise, but I liked it.
    best wishes in the contest


  • Faith of love
    January 31, 2009

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    this is very good. one of the best. the top one is what im looking for but you took it further and did the others mumbled up. great job.


  • Danny Beatty gold member
    January 31, 2009

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    this is intriguing! each sentence is funny in a wry way. the first: cunning deception, oh how the days do flap along and the weekend is the end of the runway and off we go and all that ... the second: i can't help it, it got me giggleing, and i would definitely kill for a soft cozy down quilt and would never allow another human to be a part owner of such a marvelous entity as all that ... the third: today cold all round the world, how mundane and makes the reader go check a map and figure this one out ... i like it and don't know why ... the fourth: too funny .. she best not her royal self be forgetting her official forgotten accidentally delayed whatever they do to such a finery of human glory ..
    so! now that i've made a fool of my self, i gotta tell ya , this is more fun the more I read it ..

    this is just cool ... period

    the title ... ... wonderful, odd, i love it ...

    gold i say gold i say gold gold gold ... how cool this is


    • islekine
      January 31, 2009
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      Mahalo Nui Loa!

      I love challenges...makes my old brain have to think! Instead of just purge....know what I mean? Gives me direction...lol...
      Word banks, non word banks, and challenges like this one...always get me!
      Thanks again...glad you liked em...come back...I am working on more!