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Yesterday the sun did leave

Yesterday the sun did leave,
yet it was here today...
and as I watch it part tonight
I have no fear it will not stay,
but as you were removed from me,
not very long ago...
my heart did fill with dire fright,
that with its vessel love did go.
Everyday the moon doth move
and with it moves the tides...
but let mine own blood divorce the moon!
and take your words as guides.
If come tomorrow you do decline
the gift I give of my small soul...
then perish I - in that moment of time,
and light will leave me - as a whole.

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  • xBexMyxKoibitox
    January 31
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    Yantastic

    This was wonderful.
    Even with your typo.
    Which you probably just fixed now.
    :3