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"Midnight, thinking...finally wanting to share?"

I await this person
                        …longing.
Not too much,
      yet
not too little.

        I can see them.
                                                                                            Perhaps far away,
but maybe close.
Time and distance;
diStORtEd.

But    I‘m    still    standing    here.

I can [feel] them.
  A kindred spirit
  I am quite fond of,
                            though still a mystery.
A faceless entity,
relinquished from the petty restraints
    of
    “realities” lies.
I’ve not fallen                …just ready to rise.

If it is the “other half” we search,
will we be identical|lacitnedi?
                              //---this does not make sense.//
And if so…wouldn’t that make us but HA      lf a being?
Aspire to be F U L L,
Life is not considered    -mediocre.
    .Perfection does not exist...and just maybe this is how I like it.

Oh.

I crave…Desire.
            I desire to find you.

(To feel)
The sensation of being  touched
(for the first time.)
Embodied in a wi th er ing case
                      where the
                                ...shallow existence begins draining thin...
Don’t want to drown in
                                ...the barren wasteland                          ...
Drown in absence that floods.
                                Isn’t it so much more cruel?


~Uninterested in the things that
          are uninteresting.
                                     
                                    Give me something WiLD, {intense}!
                                                              Yet,
                                                      //composed\\
                                                        =intelligent=.
Keep my mind keen, my heart
e v o l v i n g;
                    THOUGH not wandering…wondering.
        Let boredom seeeeep away...
                                                              ...and drip into the past.
                              What ever will define a “dull moment”?


+This is enough.+

Pardon my ramble, my rant, my want…
I guess I was tired of keeping this one a secret.
Done with passing everything by
                                                                as it passes by me.

+but this isn’t the end.+

Author notes

Hmm...pretty self-explanatory I hope?
Read closely...you might get more out of it than you initially think. :]

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  • a good piece of poetry which flows smoothly along the course of creativity, it lingers on the edge of brilliance, shining brightly with poetic bliss. and captures the colours of life, and love. in the folds of heaven eyes shine brightly, wondrously as the sparkled spiralled caress of magnificence sails through the twists and turns of splendid atmosphere. there is a flow that dances along with a smooth rhythm and stylish rhyme.

    oh sorry this did not rhyme, i mst have been young and confused without a mind!


  • FreakofNight
    January 31
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    The format seems a little confusing, but that also makes it a very interesting and creative write.