Che stands gazing unto the sunset,
with her pet Mingo standing by.
Her spear is made of stone,
and she has fire in her eye.
Org took off with his buddies,
and she thinks it is a sin.
She was happy when she told him,
that some family was moving in.
It’s her brother and his wife,
and their bratty little runt.
Because her fat and lazy brother,
hurt his foot and couldn’t hunt.
She’s getting madder by the minute,
And her patience getting thin.
There’s nothing left to eat inside,
and her brother’s hungry again.
Che knows Org is out there someplace,
swilling down that cactus juice.
And when he comes staggering home,
she’ll turn him every way but loose.
P.N.
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt. by Angelflower.
700 points, ended February 22, 2009, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great
See look what we fairer sex have to put up with
ha ha ha
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lol what a wonderful poem.. and a strong woman to have to put up with so much! I would have been at my wits end within the first 5 minutes! lol.. thank you very much for your entry.. best of luck in the contest.
Angel
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Well done.
best wishes to you,
Passions
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Awesome!
WOW ! ! Another awesome story!
Keep up the good work!
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a man that writes love poems and has a sense of humor. i must have died and gone to heaven. i love story poems and this one flows so effortlessly.the take on the image is very creative and very original. my best to you in the contest.
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Awesome!!!
Wow! That was great! Your stanzas flow perfectly, and your words go with the picture flawlessly! I love the story that you created from that picture! Oh, wow...just, wow!
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Very very well done. You certainly put poem to picture and it went hand in hand perfectly. I love the names you used. Mingo reminds me of the Indian in Daniel Boone. I use to love that show. This whole piece was just so funny and made me laugh so much. I don't think I would want to be Org when he gets home, especially when she has a sweet lovable pet like Mingo. Be very very quiet! Fantastic stuff! Good luck in the contest.
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Ha ha!!
You bring a clever piece of humour to this pic prompt.
Very well done.
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Brilliant!!
Good luck in the contest, and beware red sky in morning!! Peace, xx Cyn 
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