Vignetted dreams
worry about her
beauty.
With creased brows
she willingly paints
red, blue and yellow
not understanding why
these colours veil
the agonising distortions
like a wrong stroke
or a unsuitable shade
in her canvas.
Trembling fingers
caress golden flicks
slowly
~falling motionless~
She cries & smiles
not understanding
which masquerade
is hers.
Author notes
prompt- Colour her gone
Its about the feelings(colours) that she has and needs to decide whether she can live or move on! 
Please tell me what you think
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Oooh... movement...
I love the structure of this poem, its flow and fluidity... The words are inspired and there is such a lot of subtle vividness here... Good take on your prompt.
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Thanks a lot!
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ohhh this is soo well written
""She cries & smiles
not understanding
which masquerade
is hers.""
This is so well written.. I love this so much thank you for penning this pieve.. good luck with the contest!!
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thanks a lot!
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She cries & smiles
not understanding
which masquerade
is hers.
intense write. i really enjoyed this. well done.
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thanks couldbeworse!
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Again!! brilliant layout and use of the space to move your words, I love the way you set things out, as for the poem itself brilliant as always.
Laura
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Thank you!
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Calming beautiful words. Blessings.
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Thanks
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A very beautifully written poem! I absolutely love the imagery and your take on the prompt. Good luck in the contest!
Blessed Be,
-Sadien
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Thanks zombie
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beautifully written! the emotions are well expressed in this piece. you have a great way with speaking through your poetry. you captured me from the beginning, and i didnt want it to end. i love the imagery and everythin about this poem, i wouldnt change a thing. thanx for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck
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Thanks sweet victory! Glad ya enjoyed it!
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so creatively expressive.... x
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thanks
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