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sitting once more in the old garden






She lay beside a withered tree
lifting her cheek gently
to feel the kiss and the wisp of air
stirred by September's breath

held too closely to her lips...

a winged beauty ~
does not make a summer.




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Word Prompt: Toxic Butterfly

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  • Lady Michaella
    February 2, 2009

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    wow... this is absolutely amazing.. fabulous imagery here, its stunning. and soooo beautiful. one of the best i have read so fart.
    great job

    x

  • Papagallo
    January 31, 2009
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    Soft, quiet, and beautiful. May the contest be good to you.


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    January 31, 2009
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    awesome imagery.

    well done!




  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    January 31, 2009
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    Light and lovely...like a butterfly.

    All the best my dear.
    MJ.