Everytime I look at/or see a sunset
I remember the time when we first
met...
When I found you and you found me
I knew that I was truly blessed
For you are a treasure, that couldn't
be measured against any other
treasure that's in this world.
My friend and partner, girl and wife
how much more radiance you brought
into my life.
I hoped and prayed that she would be
mine and God answered me with her
as a gift which I treasure with all my
heart.
Because she is my aphrodrite and venus
which devours my love and my being of
which I am so thankful for.
She is the love of my life, but most of all
she's my wife...
Author notes
The love I have for my wife grows much more as time goes by... I will still be adding to this poem even as I have taken off the unfinished part of it... Thanks for reading the words of my heart and soul...
A contest entry
- Lovers (under 100 words total) by misticmoonlite.
400 points, ended February 6, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I agree
As I know what it is like to be in love and enjoy the companionship of a wonderful man... you put the biggest smile on my face, you keep your heart filled with her and she will never sway...
thank you for this entry
good luck
mm
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Lucky lucky wife to have such a beautiful poem created just for her-and bless you DB for writing it-
Hilly xx
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