Why did you hit me
I am your daughter
Why did you push me away?
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Holly Allen
Be honest, be brutal, be totally true, and tell me what you think
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This is so sad lass.....
it's just very sad...
Bless you
little gypsy,
Liam
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im not sure but i think i am completely out of points was trying to give u 3 on the applaud but wont let me so just know i am thinking it ok lol
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i luv this i really luv the length and u get feeling behind it even tho it is short
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questions that have run through the minds of hurt daughters throughout the ages in many different languages...and you've put it here in 3 powerful lines. to the point. wicked.
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although its short and brief but it contains alote of emotions and describes how you are lost in thoughts for what he have done to you really you kept it short and simple in the first line you wonders why he did that and in the second line you was trying to answer the question that he didnt answer and in the last line the you showed him the result of what he have done really amazing write.
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Transparent short write....A question, midst confusion and pain...
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I hope this isn't true girly. Great write though.
Blessings,
~Michaela~
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