Altar of Love

Colours splatter
selfishly into wounds

~stabbed~

At the altar of love
.... you left.

~Am sorry~

Author notes

phoenixonfire

prompt:
Control thy passions, lest they take vengeance on thee

Taken that the man who was supposed to marry her left her at the wedding day for another woman and she killed him!

A contest entry

Evening Quickie - 15 words - PIF by Kiddy. 400 points, ended January 31, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

Please tell me what you think

Comments

By me, right now

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January 30
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I really like the first stanza, great imagery. Good luck.
- phoenixonfire
  January 30
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  thanks!
ElectricBloom
January 30

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I really like this ^.^
An interesting take on the prompt.
You have strong imagery throughout, you've managed to say a lot in so few words!

good luck in the contest

ElectricBloom
- phoenixonfire
  January 30
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  thanks! I will read yours once you finish it!