Each second passed seemed
to beckon the rebirth of a
teardrop butterfly
It was like she flew beneath
them, dancing in endless
twirls, sequences she
remembers like deja vu
Faithless leaps through
the sky scattered with
thoughtless words, smiling inside
through an emotional holocaust
Magic littered on her
heartbeat, seeming to
fade, but never disappear
Faith meant nothing here
Author notes
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Comments
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Empty thoughts leaving nothing for the imagination to feed on; without faith there can be no hope without hope there can be no light without light there can be no day and so we all survive in darkness.
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This reminds me of a book I read once entitled "Echo". If you haven't read it, I urge you to go to the library and find it..... It was a personal favorite of mine, so therefore you have kudos on that.
This was a powerful write, and I thank you for entering and for following my rules. -
I like your take on the prompt. excellent job with this..My favorite line is the last one..
good luck
kat
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this was really deep. it moved me, and its really beautiful.
"Faithless leaps through
the sky scattered with
thoughtless words, smiling inside
through an emotional holocaust"
i really like these lines. it was so original and the words you used made it so powerful and it just stood strong. an impactful write, keep it up wee
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