uncontrolled-
grip as muscle cramp
fuselage suspends animation
...keratin flayed still
noise hurled and picked-
lost to the humming raid of sound.
Author notes
Prompt: Floating in the static
In a list
A contest entry
- Word Prompt by Angelflower.
700 points, ended February 12, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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oh this was really interesting and unique!!
I like what you did with the prompt! you did a wonderful job! thank you very much for your entry!! best of luck!
Angel
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'lost to the humming raid of sound' and first line and fourth line ... these are brilliant lines, especially the first because it pulls the title "Solo" into the fray by sheer force and envelops it ,,, as the second and third line uses an almost sensual force to mold it and take it fully through the poem into the solo, lost to the humming raid of sound ... i know this is short but it is sheer power ... nice!!! this is just fine, fine work
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a wonderful take on the promt good luck in the contest
maralisa
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OOh very good! Hope you win this one.
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Thanks for the encouragement Glad you like it.
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cool!
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