Serenely bobbing...
...hands behind my head,
over, under and around,
all those things you said...
Dis-connected energy,
comes in bursts and bits,
tearing at serenity,
causing bumps and pits.
Breathe deep... meditate...
clear your cluttered mind,
float in peace and harmony
let your soul, unwind.
Author notes
Word Prompt: Floating in the static
A contest entry
- Word Prompt by Angelflower.
700 points, ended February 12, 2009, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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oh I loved the flow of this write.. and the soft rhyme was wonderful as well! you truly did a lovely job with your take on the prompt. I really did enjoy reading this.. thank you very much for your entry.. best of luck in the contest.
Angel
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Thank you so much for your lovely comments...
I really enjoyed the contest!
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Nice job on that quote!
Love it!
best wishes in the contest
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Thanks!
I love your new avatar! ......
colors are awesome!
me
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this is amazing.
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Thanks so much for your comment!
I'm glad you liked it!
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