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Empty

                               Cold hands run down me
                         Never ceasing as force is on me
I can't move,

                 make a noise,

                                    say a word
           My mind is lost
         Trying not to feel
    Trying to cease to exist

        My mind is blank
      Full of empty static
                                             My soul
                                                                                     Has gone

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  • Angelflower
    February 12

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    this was really nice. I like the feel of this write.. thank you very much for sharing. best of luck in the contest.

    Angel


  • Lady Michaella
    January 31

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    wow
    this is a seriously sad poem here
    this one reallllllly reallly got to me, terribly sad.
    x

  • My soul
    Has gone
    amazing words, in an amazing poem