did you expect it to hurt me
did you expect me to fall down and die
well no I'm not gonna lie
It hurt me just not enough to cry
Its a road on life
a path one has to take
just about expected this
kinda saw it on your face
so I'm a quiet and shy guy
so i dont have the bravery of a king
but when it comes to the one i like
I'll treat her like a queen
It's just a road on life
a path one has to take
just about expected this
kinda saw it on your face
every time i tried
you were with another guy
eventualy i thought
I just cant
It seems although
i don't want to say it
... I was right
Author notes
I'm not that good but yea...
What did you think
Comments
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nice
i think youve done well, i like that you are certain about whats gone wrong
as for the poem, the ryhme scheme was a bit off but it worked, kinda slant rhyme i guess, dont know if thats what you were going for, but nice job
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aw this was really sweet and sad. The rhyming really fit into the poem. great job
~gabi
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