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~~rose~` (haiku)

Missing image
Magic rose garden
soft permeated perfume
enhancing her scent

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Pic found at www.JamesBrowne.net

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  • SabaSophiya
    April 18

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    Beautifully executed.......way to go.....take care

    Best,
    Sophie


  • Mariana gold member
    March 9

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    This is beautiful. I adore roses. The picture and background complete this lovely haiku. Well done and good luck in the contest.

    Mariana  


  • Angelic Princess21
    February 2
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    this is really beautiful! i like this. keep up the amazing work hun!
    ~Angelic Princess~


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    February 1

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    This is just beautiful! Awesome
    Haiku complimented with the
    perfect background and picture!
    Very well done. Best of luck in the
    contest.


  • LunaSilverStars
    January 30

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    very pretty, i just love the scent, did you realize when you picked that photo that it looks slightly like you? i am sorry that you are in pain, i hope that you feel better soon, good luck!


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    January 30
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    This is just gorgeous. The pic and the poem. Just beautiful!


  • Kathraina silver member
    January 30
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    Aww this is so beautiful. Everything here works well together. Bravo!!!

    ♥ Kathraina


  • Melodies
    January 30

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    If the fragrance is roses, I will love it. What is more pretty than a rose poem? Only real roses, and you have gathered up a basket filled with them in my imagination.


  • Maxboy gold member
    January 30

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    Beautiful words sis I wish I could do these.

    Wonderful...Best wishes in the contest
    Big Bro


  • queenie
    January 30

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    this so relates to the image.it's like she is wearing the roses and your words helped to smell the scent. i like your haikus. they show that wonderful soul of yours.


  • doolie gold member
    January 30

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    Such a beautiful haiku sis. You are so good at this.
    One can almost smell the perfume.
    Best of luck in the contest.


  • Desire gold member
    January 30

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    Oh My~

    Ooooooooooooh this reminds me of a scent I adore and wanted to inhale more of~
    Beautiful Haiku Sis!
    I don't normally do this type of form~ but You pen this so well~ Bravo!!
    Another Excellent verse
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 30

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    lovely haiku, nice to see you getting the hang of this form, good luck in this contest, it looks perfect! ,mm


  • maralisa silver member
    January 30
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    aw a beautiful haiku good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • penman gold member
    January 30
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    Excellent

    Wow, you are so good at these. Simply amazing. Best of luck in the contest

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