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You Make Me Feel

You make me feel
Like I've got butterflies
You make me feel
Alive, in the wake of your sunrise
You make me feel
Like no words can possibly describe
You make me feel
Like loving you would best any bribe
You make me feel
Like ripping my hair out
You make me feel
Like releasing an aggravated shout
You make me feel
Crazy, like I'm going insane
You make me feel
Divine, but I must be losing my brain
Because you make me feel
Different, although I've never changed
But how can this be true?
Does this make me deranged?
All I know is that
With you in my life
The things that sucked before
Come across as minor strife..
Whenever you're around,
Each moment seems to expand;
Every feeling is enhanced,
Every good turns into grand!
Baby, you make me feel
Like I've never felt before!
In all the world I've searched,
None compare to you, who I adore...
I know I haven't
Had you quite long enough,
But if I happened to die today,
I'd be okay, and I'd stand tough
For the few memories
That we love to share
Equate a lifetime for some,
But I'd love to make more, if I dare...
Baby,
Darling,
Sweetcheeks,
Angel,
Grant me this one request
Please, be my valentine?
Your 'yes' would make me blessed!

Author notes

YEAH!
*love is truly beautiful when you find it. I want the best love poems you can come up with...lost love, true love, sad love, whatever love you truly have or believe in.*

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  • Antebellum
    April 4
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    cute.
    good luck


  • Anu-Nataraj
    February 24

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    sooo nice !
    reli cute and adorable..
    although flow from beginning was lil rough friend..but thats ok
    good job all the way !

  • A-muse-in-writer
    February 8
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    Love this one

    I can relate to the emotions and feel of this one. Well written.


    • Loveberry
      February 9
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      Thanks so much! and that's exactly the reaction I was hoping to get from this...


  • Kathraina silver member
    February 8
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    Judged-ola!

    AWWW this is beautiful and sweet!

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    February 3
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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • WithinYourEyes
    February 2

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    How cute! I really liked it, and the upbeat feeling. It's a great Valentine's Day poem! Good luck and thanks for entering the contest!


  • Emotional-wreck
    February 2

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    I know I haven't
    Had you quite long enough,
    But if I happened to die today,
    I'd be okay, and I'd stand tough

    awww omg been there done that!
    loved those lines!
    GOOD LUCK!


  • Lisa.
    February 1
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    WOW ITS REALY GOOD KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND GOOD LUCK


    • Loveberry
      February 2
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      haha thank you! and i'm def lovin the pic you got lmao... very cute


  • Ephiphany
    February 1

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    Awwww....

    this is so sweet.
    Good luck and thanks for entering.

    -e

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