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Forget The Umbrella; Let It Rain

I'm no greater than my Saviour
and His suffering so topples mine.
Any way you slice it, God is kind.

If sin caused Him to suffer
it just must be well understood
that I must suffer, this is all good.

He took the thing full force
we get a drop or two;
and some of us are overdue.

We don't suffer with no purpose
all gold is to be refined.
Once the 'dross' is off, then it shines.

It's all in the spin of things.
It's the contrast of the night
that makes the day shine bright.


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  • Yemassee gold member
    July 19

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    It is a comforting poem that we all need to remember sometimes, that He suffered for us and that he is always there for us. Well expressed and deserving of the trophy.

  • So true, we are Gold which is ''being''refined, lovely poem well done
    David


  • BonnieQ silver member
    March 1

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    Gold it should Have been!

    This says it all, Sis. What the majority fail to realize is that we, the sheep, suffer now for our past sins so that we will be taken up in the end; while everyone around us is falling dead by the brightness of His coming.

    As you say, so I say: I'd far rather suffer now, knowing that I suffer for Jesus as well as my past sins, and knowing He suffered far worse than we.

    Fantastic poem. It truly reveals God's Love in the understanding He has given you.

    Much love & hugs, SisBon


  • Melodies
    February 21

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    Aye, God is kind and loves us, every one. A beautiful poem that makes me glad. Your poetry has a wonderful light that shines.


  • whitenoise
    February 19

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    a senstiments poem with the spiritual, i like the way you are in a way sticking up for god here as so many will question, its got a great flow and soft rhyme
    well done
    white


  • Ez Writer silver member
    February 11

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    A lovely poem and sentiments , delightful insight !
    Thank you for sharing !!
    Best wishes ! Friend Easy


  • midnight eyes
    February 10

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    Wow. This is very good I liked it a lot. Keep up the good work.

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