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Take That

Don't you dare
Crawl back to me
Through all the tears
You helped me see

I'm done with worrying
I'm done with chasing
I'm done with all the games
That you're still playing

I've moved on
And its about time
For my turn
To leave someone else behind

Now I don't know how
I thought we could be
You're in love with yourself
When it should have been me

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  • CedricDempNQ2
    February 9
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    Nice poem and zany little poem Cbc. Quite an insight here.

  • Brianna16
    February 8
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    touching

    I think that you did really well. = ) I like the title too. Humerous in a sence, and it fits the poem so well. I think that this is how a lot of people feel with one another. I hope that you keep up with YOUR good use in words as well. You could really change the world. = )


  • rbruce gold member
    February 8

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    Nice one !! Well written too. As Bob Fox said 'You point out why many relationships fail' great poem.

  • Bob Fox
    January 30

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    Poet

    A smater choice could not be made. You point out why many relationships fail. Being in love with oneslf never helps.