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Trapped

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Hasten m' Lord anon 'fore nature 's rising sun
'Tis 'pon thy gaudy mountain human eyes;
hath witnessed spirits roaming to, fro.
Afraid of lights purity; searching, searching
unyielding rock to protect pale hides.
Causing earths soil to creep, crawl away
from hulls of rotten flesh; the stench vile
in each grotto filled with bones.


Now multitudes of vampiring creatures
making their way uninvited.
Through the pitch dark vortex
thirsting for fresh new blood, innocence.
Even fallen angelic beings without
wings hath joined m' Lord....guardians
infected with the lust.
Ye hold the keys of purgatory, portals of hell!


Grant m'soul forgiveness stealer of souls;
entice our Dark Prince to release
me, let me go...!

 

**☼**

"Silence ! remember thy soul 'tis mine
reeking of maggots infesting thy bladder...
tempt me not, nor approach me anon.
Thus ye will be feasted 'pon
M' action shall nay be swayed slave...begone!"

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  • Swangrnv gold member
    January 31

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    exceptional!!

    wow, my goodness lady! wow this had such an amzing amout of imagery and creativity!! LOVE THIS WRITE! kudos to you!


  • darell
    January 31

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    Brilliant!!

    ennovy this is one of your best writes.
    I was captived and mesmerized by
    the mystery coupled with an intense
    fear factor. The pleading of souls from
    approaching doom. Being cognitive of
    the fact that something desires our soul.
    The images were clear and frightning.
    I absoulutely love this poem novy.
    Excellent excellent excellent!


  • Kathraina silver member
    January 30

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    Wow creative piece indeed!!! This took my breath away. Amazing job! Thank you for entering and good luck!

    ♥ Kathraina