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The Quintessential Loner

He dwells in dimensions
slightly offset by shades
of obscurity

reeling in nightmares
of distance realms

as a subtext to his
runaway self

chanting lullabies
of alien persuasions

soft and mystique as
a fluorescent moon on a
calm summers night

Desiring understanding
in a world bias to his own

Overshadowed by the reality
of his uniqueness

spun in a web of uncertain tunes,
where echoes mislead an audience
of amazed spectators

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  • Alittle2lost
    January 30, 2009

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    this is Very good... i really like it.. it's one of those pieces i feel like i'm going to need to reread over and over again, and let it sink it. Very good.
    Thanks for the entry, and good luck


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    January 30, 2009
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    I love it u did a wonderful job!!!!!