Alien entities
captured in
head
calling
clamoring;
acting dead.
Interpretations
hard for
alter ego,
I always
follow...
everywhere
he goes!
A contest entry
- A 2 L contest prt 1 by Just4u.
400 points, ended February 5, 2009, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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oh wow very creative and clever. great way to do this with the restriction, awesome job
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Wow~
Now this is quite the interesting contest and what a piece You have penned- the first line pulled me in~
I am intrigued here
I'll have to look at contest details for I Love this piece~ tugs at me for some reason
but then because You wrote it
Woot! 
Keep that quill dancing Beautiful~
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Voice~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Ah ha...gotcha
"she" is not an acceptable word as it is not
within the letter framework...
You have a couple days to edit
Thanks for the entry and good luck in the contest
Eddy -
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Okay...
I'm laughing because I had he...
also because...I wrote this wondering if you know of the series of phrases we have here? "Eddie would go..."
It's a local thing...
about surfing etc. Eddie is the character they use...and that's his motto...silly bit o trivia! -
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Probably a mutation of eddy which is a water whirlpool, but landlocked
as I am here would more likely think of Eddy's bread which is a local
name brand here. So have you had your slice of Eddy today...lol
I think he "goes" would work better than he "go" at the end, what do
you think... -
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yes...I edited again...
lol...I usually pay more attention...but it IS friday!
lol
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