Spirits combine in a connection of awe
at the power of nature,
while mountains crumble in confusion
making new lands of life
Tides uplift to meet the moon,
as stars collide in the heavens
in a cosmic celebration of creation,
while souls slide through dimensions of time
as renewal abounds in the universe
Tears collect in rapturous rivers
as Noah’s floods drown all despair,
and on pinnacle’s peaks
miracles occur.
Doves of peace float in fabrics of freedom
while love lavishes lineament
on sorrows sealed in hearts hollows;
ancient writings reveal all
as earth opens up to receive knowledge.
Author notes
just words drifting through a scattered mind....lol
(feel free to remove this if it is not what you are looking for....
(the pic is a NASA pic - the Eskimo nebula)
A contest entry
- Connectivity by islekine.
700 points, ended February 15, 2009, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Another one that would have won gold if I were the judge...but ya know, that's how the cookie crumbles...proverbially....
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Thanks 'Heroesrox' - glad you enjoyed.
I love the Hubble pics - anything 'cosmos'
best wishes
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Woo Hoo!!
Woot
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Thank you so much 'Desire' - glad you enjoyed this.
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Congratulations on the Bronze, this poem touched so many truths it is difficult for me to pick out what I liked best, perhaps this was my favorite stanza:
Tears collect in rapturous rivers
as Noah’s floods drown all despair,
and on pinnacle’s peaks
miracles occur.
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Thank you so much 'Skybow' for reading and for your lovely comment. I am pleased you enjoyed this.
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beautiful scattered mind full of deep awareness
so exquisite
amazing talent
a wonderful pleasure to read
God bless you my friend
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Thank you so much 'Pisces rainbow' for such a lovely comment. I am pleased you enjoyed this.
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What you have written fills my mind with so much information, penned so perfectly.
Strength and power...
Longing and the feeling of nature and celestial connections breathe.
Best wishes to you hun
Julie
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Thank you so much Julie - glad you liked this.
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I like the combination of science and religion or spirituality, a lot of people think S and R are enemies but a lot of scientists are quite religious. I think you know what you are talking about here. I love photos from Hubble and wish I knew more about the stars and space and everything.
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Thank you so much 'celadia' for reading and your lovely comment. I am pleased you enjoyed this.
I love the Hubble photo's! (have used several for contests...lol).
I sometimes almost feel science and religion have to go hand in hand.....
again, thanks
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Oh Sis...this is so beautiful. I am really taken by this to the point of tears. You have amazing thoughts "scattered" through your mind. The imagery is so breath taking...the pic just seems to be one with the words and thoughts here. I love this...
Tears collect in rapturous rivers
as Noah’s floods drown all despair,
and on pinnacle’s peaks
miracles occur.
Now tell me that is not simply amazing...
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Thank you so much sis! - glad you enjoyed this one, scattered thoughts though it was...lol...
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I have some contests...hint...hint...
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oh - I will double-check them out!
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This is so rich with imagery
I kind of sat here with my jaw hanging
open..
one of the best i've
read in a while!!
Impressed!!!!
Thank you for sharing
~Pastel
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Thank you so much Pastel - I'm pleased you really liked this one.
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Oh My Word!!
This is some Powerful stuff You have here and I love so many lines difficult to quote just one but I will mention a few lines which grabbed~
Doves of peace float in fabrics of freedom
while love lavishes lineament
I'm so slow to enter this one~ I gave myself a
Love the message You have weaved~ the energy You have delivered here also
Bravo Beautiful!
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Voice~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Thank you so much 'Desire' for such a lovely comment. I am pleased you enjoyed my thoughts.
(if you enter, make sure you send me the link!!!)
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Beautiful awesome words scattering in your brain there dear sis...LOL I loved the line with the stars colliding in celebration. I seen the center as a diamond, much like us a diamond in the rough that he smooths. Loved your vision in this write. Blessings.
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Thank you so much 'Denerica' for your lovely comment - I am glad you enjoyed this.
I like your 'view' of the diamond in the sky also....I did see that view, too, but then (with my scattered thoughts...lol) it became an eye with the lights and spirits connecting as one.....
blessings
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Holy Moly I love this The second Stanza is my favorite. I think that you did a great job here good luck to you in the contest best wishes always be well
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Thank you so much Starz - glad you really liked this!
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Yeah right!!!
Nothing "scattered" about this one...I totally understand EVERY line...the universe is speaking...
and only a few...are listening...I believe that's where your awesome, oh so true, words are flowing from...
You know me!!! I think we have access to it ALL, just as soon as we figure out how to use our minds!!!
Thanks...Best wishes in the contest...and always!
Write on and on and on...please!!!
I so enjoy your work!
s
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Thank you so much 'islekine' - glad you liked these scattered thoughts...lol
(the pic reminded me of an eyeball - with all the connections and light coming together in the center......hmmmmm...
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