His sculptured form encompassed me as graceful
as the morning mist, moving like a whisper
moist lips lovingly teased flesh - worshipped.
As he hovered like a fragrance above me
flashing an hypnotic smile - adoring,
jewels fell from his mouth as he spoke,
my thighs gently opened their silky petals,
in a seductive caress tender and soft,
within the sunrise of our love - cherishing,
the first moments of a dew washed morning,
weaving the strands of our souls,
into an intricate tapestry of devotion.
Within a moment of deep trust and tenderness,
a waterfall of affection cascaded,
colouring every detail of our life,
like a masterpiece - priceless.
To deep for words,
happy within the hush of our momentary Eden,
we basked in our union - content.
A contest entry
- Artistic Seduction. by Poetryintheblood.
550 points, ended February 3, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your BEST sensual/love poems by perfectsunset.
800 points, ended March 19, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow this was absolutely beautiful.
Very sensual and filled with such tender
love and romance. Deeply emotional.
Overall, an amazing write!
Thanks for sharing & best of luck -
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Thank you for your lovely comment
Valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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Very nice. It's really poetic and descriptive, I can almost see this.
The only thing I take issue with (and it's a personal thing) is the word "sculptured". It just reminds me of Edward Cullen from Twilight, and I cannot stand Twilight.
So yeah...that's just me. Aside from that one word, loved it. -
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I appreciate your comment, as for Twilight I must be the only one not in the loop, I have no idea what it is and often wonder what all the fuss is about. LOL!
Thank you again for taking your time to read.
~sugar~
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Pretty.
Beyond romantic, sis. The flow to this one was superb. I suddenly feel very romantic, myself. Good one.
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Aww, glad you enjoyed bro, ya romantic you
As always a pleasure to have you read
~sugar~
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Gulps!
Wow hun such a beautiful sensual write
Each line and stanza breathes the touches
Loved it
Thanks for sharing and best wishes to you
Julie x
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Thank you hon for your fab comment
always appreciated
~sugar~
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Thank you for your most beautifully sensual entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Thank you for your lovely comment
~sugar~
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this write definitely fits the title of the contest. i think i will now log off and go find my husband. i wish you the best of luck in this contest that you have entered. viyanna rosemarie
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Thank you for your lovely comment, so glad you enjoyed.
Valued and appreciated.
~sugar~
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IT LOOKS LIKE YOUR MUSE HAS BEEN RENEWED AND REBORN WITH THE EUPHORIC KISS OF LOVE SWEET LOVE!
Too deep for words,
happy within the hush of our momentary Eden,
we basked in our union - content.
A heartfelt, soulful, sweet, tender, sultry, and sensual piece, Sugar - sweeter than your AP name. Damn, that fellow is A VERY LUCKY CHAP indeed. Love is all anybody needs - and the pieces that you have written this week are proof of that - if you ask me. GOOD LUCK in the contest with this piece that is as good as gold to me.
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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Aww thank you baby, for your wonderful comment.
I never thought I would find love again, not like this..
love is what we all need A pleasure as always
to have you comment.
Love you Chelle xxx
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My keyboard
is shaking in orgasmic delight! My little furry mouse is jumping up and down with joy.
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From ya fab comment hon I am gathering this hit the spot, so glad you enjoyed
always appreciate you reading and commenting
Love ~sweetness~ xxx
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"My thighs gently opened their silky petals" is a very very poetic line. The whole poem is like a pearl, beautiful, sparkling, and precious. Cheers!!!
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So glad you enjoyed, thank you for taking the time to read.
~sugar~
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Well you have sure do a sensual painting here showing all one needs to feel or remember....and excellent poem of erotica....you go miss lady......write on!..novy
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aww thank you novy for your lovely comment
appreciated as always
~sugar~
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lost in the moment of of your writing,wow such feeling and emotion, a poem that leaves me thinking and very few do this x
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Thank you YK for your lovely comment, so glad you enjoyed this.
~sugar~
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jesus!!
wow, my friend this is smoking hot sexy!! wow..
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Glad you enjoyed, thank you for stopping by
~sugar~
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This is so lovely and sensuous what an incredible piece!!! I love the way that you wrote this so lovely and hott!!! You did an amazing job!!!! I love it!!!!! Ur details and descriptions are so truly perfect and the flow is marvelous!!!! A truly magnificent piece!!!!
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Thank you for your lovely comment
value and appreciate you stopping by to read.
~sugar~
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tastefully erotic. very touching and sensual. It flowed really well. I enjoyed this write.
the first moments of a dew washed morning,
weaving the strands of our souls,
into an intricate tapestry of devotion.
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Thank you for your wonderful comment
~sugar~
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This conjures up one of the most tender moments I have ever read, it feels so passionate, warm and sensual, this is sheer beauty. I would say one of your best to date.
All the best, good luck with the contest
Emma
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Thanks hon, always a pleasure to have you read.
I hope all is well, been a while
~sugar~
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