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Like Romeo and Juliet

Little did I know once I said hello
that such passion would my heart find with you.
Seeing the beauty of your face all aglow,
while in your eyes I found something so true.
We dance so close, bodies pressed against each other so tight,
as we find something between us that we can not ignore.
Wanting to feel your kiss would give my heart such delight,
for it is you my fair maiden that I adore.
Like Romeo and Juliet, two star crossed lovers found,
such emotions within our hearts so strong we can not deny.
My heart my soul to you is now bound,
how I long for this night to never end and never say good-bye.
We meet in the garden alone within the the moonlight's bliss.
as we exchange the token of each others love within a tender kiss.

The world might be against us and try to keep up apart,
but the love we share will never be broken.
For this special affection we feel for each other stays locked within the heart,
lips in a sweet embrace; no words need to be spoken.
Let us run away from this place where we can be alone,
to start a life together and let our love blossom.
Let not anything our heart's desire be postpones,
for this passion we feel, we both know is awesome.
Together within each other arms is where we both truly belong,
two lovers joined together within in the eternal bliss of their love.
Knowing that this that we feel can never be wrong,
as angels smile down upon us from the heavens above.
My fair Juliet all my words and my heart I do speak are true,
never have I loved a maiden....as much as I love you.

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 31, 2009

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    lovely

    Romeo and Juliet, passionate for two true lovers
    thank you for this entry to my contest and good luck..MM


  • Sandygram silver member
    January 30, 2009

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    A Delightful Poem!!!!!

    A very romantic love story. Yes we all wish to find our Romeo or Juliet. But their love story ended so tragically. Another wonderful poem my friend. Hugs and Smiles.

    Blessings to you. Sandy


  • geckogirl
    January 30, 2009
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    Awesome words Michael, you deseve a trophy for this...
    l.o.l when did I say you start...