Here's my last words to you all,
that had to watch me fall
No longer will you have to see me get worse,
not once my body's carried away in a hearse.
I know i failed you all,
you weren't supposed to watch me fall.
I was the one who had to stay strong,
no matter how much in my life, that you didn't know, was wrong.
all my pain that you denied,
and everything I tried to hide.
Just pushed me over the edge,
I can no longer hold onto the ledge.
I'm so sorry to disappoint you,
But my life, i can't renew.
For everyone who flickered into my life,
I know that, into your life, I brought new heights.
I'm sorry i left, but it's for the best.
No longer will you have to worry,
for forever, i'll be gone in a hurry.
Just know that now i'll be in peace,
and finally free of your worries, at least.
So here's my last goodbye,
It's time for my soul to fly.
I'm sorry, but it's what i have to do,
I hope that i saved some of you, from what i went through.
Forever i'll be your "Guardian Angel", through and through.
Author notes
this is what i wrote when i was thinking of suicide, and after i moved away
(Famous Last Words)
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a very emotional write, I feel really related to this piecee, then I have been feeling the same way for some time and fear that I might be falling back into this state...it was rather strange than I felt like you had stolen those words straight from my mind, it sounds crazy I know...
I liked the rhyming scheme, it makes your piece dynamic and flowing...
take care and good luck in my contest
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no i completely understand what u mean, and thanks for the comment
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This is a very emotional peice and as the reader I can get a picture of what you might have felt while writing this.
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Interesting poem, this poem is full of emotion i can relate to this on most days, but i try to find something uplifting to alleviate the pain that buries beneath me but enough of me rambling on an on i like this one, keep on writing
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this is amazing. i've thought that at least a thousand times. i know what it's like. if you ever need to talk, i'm here.
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wow.. So here's my last goodbye,
It's time for my soul to fly.
I'm sorry, but it's what i have to do,
I hope that i saved some of you, from what i went through.
Forever i'll be your "Guardian Angel", through and through.
absolutely loved this part -
Thanks for entering a suicidal poem. I was looking for cutting and suicidal, but I think yours is only one of two of the suicidal prompts.
I'm sorry that sometimes we all feel this way, but Thanks for entering, and good luck! -
I hate when i bottle stuff up, it makes everything seem so much worse than it acaully is. at times i want to scream and make it all go away. but i think you said what i felt already. and im glad your not thinking about ending your life now. because the future is blind..so who knows what could happen really...
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