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Running with Tigers



The shadow of wild woman lurks,
singing over the bones
climbing to the tops of trees
where she learned
what orgasm would one day feel like –
a wild seed that arrives on the wind
beneath a  jesus-god sunset
as with lighted lanterns,
the fishermen

come up from the lake at dusk

He thinks he sees her behind the oleander
in robes vying with their white,
and around her neck, a key spins
rotating on a tiger's eye ring
inviting him to seduce her
with the faint sex of salt and angophora trees

The giving of the body
is the ultimate phase of love -
inviting him to drink wounded wine

from earthen cups and succumb to false promises
in the yes of slim dark strangers

Frantic for the return of the light
she rejoices at summer’s genesis -
and another kind of fire was kindled in me —
with this elegy that heralds
a most astounding love upon the horizon

We burn evergreens and sage,
as did the ancient Celts and Gaels
to banish bitterness
(and there has been so much bitterness)
mine are the footsteps you hear in the night
echoing like creation’s daughter,
gleaming sapphires where eyes should be

and adorned in theatre colours

I shall write and fetch
to water beneath the old bridge
where the stream tumbles furiously
with the ancient erotic rhythm
of the ocean, embracing her like a lover,
tumbling into a gorgeous orgy of spume
black as a raven’s wing, the voices of fire
rising higher

than the cloud point of molten silver

It is so hard when your own
soul is hurting and it will not
listen to you
but you cannot cut out the soul
because it is family


Those are the feelings here…



















Running with Tigers
©crisstiena

Author notes

I decided to bring my own prompt: Wild Woman

“You will not be free.
Oh wild thing
forgive me, for
I am as trapped as you...”

Image: Wild Inside by KemicalReaxion@DeviantArt

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  • lunarlunacy
    February 25

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    The giving of the body
    is the ultimate phase of love -
    inviting him to drink wounded wine

    from earthen cups and succumb to false promises
    in the yes of slim dark strangers

    pure poetry!
    thank you for such an enchanting read. very well done.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    February 14

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    I love this...it says so much and is so creative...a wonderful piece of art in words...great imagery and this is my favoriIte stanza..." It is so hard when your own
    soul is hurting and it will not
    listen to you
    but you cannot cut out the soul
    because it is family'

    Best,
    mystic


  • Balldinger silver member
    February 3

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    sleeping in Siberia...

    when her victorian skin goes missing, will she strip her sterling nerve of his concubescent prescence long enough to endure his inability to tame fire?

    her light casts shadows long in colored outlines; her sagacity drips like kerosene toward his candle light; her range is outside of herself; his imperial throb stops at his throat where there is no room for breath to take him over...


  • zt
    February 2

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    He could feel the rumble of a primal growl reverberate through his chest pressed against hers and knew that to let go, would invite ruin...

    Your first stanza reminded me of a commercial for BBC America...rowboats out on a dark sea, assembling a full moon from the jigsaw pieces of light each carried. A lovely image...


  • DolceVito gold member
    January 30

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    Stunning, extraordinary write, highly enjoyable read.

    "We burn evergreens and sage,
    as did the ancient Celts and Gaels
    to banish bitterness
    (and there has been so much bitterness)
    mine are the footsteps you hear in the night
    echoing like creation’s daughter,
    gleaming sapphires where eyes should be
    and adorned in theatre colours" Super cool.

    Vito


  • Bean Sidhe silver member
    January 30

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    Wow. This is a lovely, sensitive piece threaded with a touch of soft eroticism. I had a terrible time choosing my favorite part until:

    "It is so hard when your own
    soul is hurting and it will not
    listen to you
    but you cannot cut out the soul
    because it is family"

    Wonderful. I always find it possible, and indeed, probable that I learn from my competition and peers. I have learned here. Thank you for sharing your skills and good luck in the contest!

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