The river runs full of violent tears,
flowing out from wasted years, wasted time
spent inside this place-
I feel inside of myself a force stronger than any
to hang on tight with-
Obsession : seen as elegy
as elegy makes way for light
but 1000 lines can't make something like this right.
Only two hearts together letting each other know
they need one another to breathe
can heal this wound.
What can I say to make you understand?
when there is responsibility on both sides,
pain pulsing through both minds,
the same running through both veins-
the solution must be double-sided as well.
A contest entry
- anything-it doesnt matter what! by Gods only child.
410 points, ended July 2, 62 entries
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a beautifully written poem

