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Beautiful Individual That Causes Hardons

I'm black and proud
You look at me whenever I go around
You call me a bitch because I dont listen to you

Guess what...
I dont care
Call me a bitch
But Im still alive
Keep on calling me that
But Im still me
Make fun of me
But I still keep my head up high

Call me a bitch
I take on the name
And wear it with pride
Because a REAL bitch doesnt care if you call her that

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  • KatherineAnne
    April 16, 2009

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    Haha! The title goes great with this write. I love it!

    "I take on the name
    And wear it with pride
    Because a REAL bitch doesnt care if you call her that"

    Amen to that!

    =)


  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    January 31, 2009

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    Thank you for your directly spoken entry, Kudos to you for standing up for what you believe, good luck in my contest, Josie