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A purple cow ? I wonder how
That lady was created,
And if she does regret it now
That she was thusly fated ?

And does she pine, alone at night
For bull of perfect colour ?
A little black, with touch of white,
To be her beaux, her lover ?

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  • cricketjeff gold member
    February 14

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    Another different take on the contest Love this one, thanks for entering up to the finals I think

    Jeff


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    February 10
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    Very clever. I enjoyed this one. ~Pamela

  • jadeangyal
    February 4

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    I really liked this one! I think it is great that you actually wrote about a purple cow. Her story needs to be he(a)rd!


    • Keith
      February 5
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      What a truly dreadful pun! I'm very impressed. Keep up the deft linguistics!


  • Sheli silver member
    January 31

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    I LOVED IT! hehe

    It gave Miss Bossie hope one day
    when told by Frank the Cowherd;
    A handsome bull would call today,
    known here abouts as Howard!

    When Howard's eyes saw Bossie's flanks,
    he gave bellow melodious!
    He clicked his heel and gave Frank thanks.
    Now will Cow be Harmonious?


  • Sandygram
    January 31

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    So funny

    Well I hope she finds her mate.
    And loneliness is not her fate
    To pine alone would be so sad
    Might make the poor cow go mad

    This was a joy to read. Brought a smile. Best of luck. Smiles, Sandy


  • MargaretG
    January 31

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    I recall long ago a discussion about the sad fate of Paul Bunyan's blue ox; however, he might have had blue relatives with pink friends... I like the whimsy set in serious sounding lines. Good luck!


  • echo-ink
    January 31
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    Now theres a (COW) of a different color, lol

  • Judith Chandler
    January 30
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    Holstein bull and psychedelic cow. A bizarre hybrid

  • Bad Bill
    January 30
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    Wonderfully wacky, Keith - and very enjoyable!

    Good one,
    Bill


  • no win no fee
    January 30
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    you have a strange slant on life Keith and I like that about you. good luck in the contest. xx


    • Keith
      January 31
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      Thanks, hen. If my slant gets much stranger, I'll probably fall over!

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