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Man of Mystery

I see before me

an ocean of faces

Each one dreaming

of magical places

All energy focused

on the celebration

While getting caught up

in the intoxication

 

 

 

 

I can't help thinking

of the one which I seek

Is he just around the corner

having an ice cold drink?

Hearts beat rapidly

while the blood is flowing

Every hope crushed

as disappointment is growing

 

 

 

 

Butterflies flap their wings

ever so furiously inside

My feelings of anxiousness 

this mask cannot seem to hide

The moment then comes

when something parts the sea

There is a face in the crowd

that can only be my man of mystery

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

**Special thanks to All Posters.com, So Cal Design Co, Maschera Art, & Art Intelligence.net for the photographs of Venetian Masks & to my friend Kat for the beautiful customized background**

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  • Eusebius
    April 20

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    A most deftly done piece of poetry, very much like a song lyric... potent and powerful write! I loved it!!!


  • sunoir
    February 2

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    Loved the graphics. The lead up with the doubt made the last stanza stand out for me. Like a passion arising from
    love's maelstrom. Kudos


  • TJ Becker
    February 1

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    amazing

    I loved everything about this, the flow, the energy the imagination and the creativity. Not to mention the great job on the pics and borders. A poem that deserves more the 3 but ah all I can give. Again awesome


  • GoodbyeFarewell
    January 30

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    wow

    i love this piece i love the grahpics for this very amazing job on that i love the write truly amazing write keep up the good wok i love it keep it up keep on going stay true stay sic peace out and have a nice day


  • liltulip gold member
    January 30
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    love this one

    very much!

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