If anybody ever tries
to read and understand
the script written
with unknown syllables
devoid of any linguistic pattern
when we speak love without words,
they will stay... silent.
Nobody will ever be close enough
to decrypt them the right way,
like some tried with da Vinci’s code.
They will have to leave it
in its unpronounceable beauty.
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true, so true, so unpronounceable that we will spend a life time trying to pronounce it, and resultng in all this and such beauty
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Love is where the moon been ... yes? And oh, how the moon does impregnate the lover fancying another with a touch unbeknownst but still there and unknowable is the source of love, but it roots us into the earth and places us between the flower petal and the sun where the earth and the stars become one ... we the are conduit of love when we are truly loved ...
yes?
thankyou for inspiring me to prattle on in this manner
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This is your comment or you just write a new love poem of your own? Thank you for this kind of prattle.
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yes and yes and you are so welcome
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Yes
The language of love requires no speech.
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Thank you for your always kind visit to my site of poetry.
~Sonja~
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i don't think a love that exists between two people can ever be 'decoded' ..this is beautiful
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Yes, true, but you know it yourself, aren't you?
~Sonja~
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This is beautiful, Sonja.... and yes, the reader can only fall silent while witnessing love and "unpronouceable beauty" like this.
~ Nicolette
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A lady whose other name is Poetry is talking to me. Thank you. I am so glad to see you back. But, you know what I think.
~Sonja~
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i love that line
unpronounceable beauty
this is a lovley read, elegant
white
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Thank you dear whitenoise for making this kind of whir on my site.
~Sonja~
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This is charming, really. The first verse for me works exceptionally well. Love is probably the most written about theme in the world, as it should be, yet you are right, no one has really put their finger on exactly what it is, what it means. We all have our own experiences and so wonderful is that feeling we cannot help but try to put it down in words. I learnt a new word 'decrypt', thanks for that, my preference, though, would have been 'decipher'. On a stylistic note, if you don't mind my offering a suggestion. The line 'like some tried with da Vinci’s code' i would have written it in another way, 'as someone tried with.. OR 'as some have tried with...', and by 'da Vinci’s code' do you mean the book? If yes, then perhaps '...with the da Vinci code' We need an article, the, here since the code is not da Vinci's but Dan Brown's. In the line 'when we speak love without words', perhaps that should be 'of love without words'. These are trivial details and I hope it was OK to suggest them. Despite this, I am sure your love will know exactly what you mean. Regards
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Sorry for waiting for my comment bur recently I was so busy and not in the right mood to answer to most of comments. Thank you for your constructive suggestion.
~Sonja~
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