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Flame Within Heart

Intermingling aura; passion emerges,
golden beautifies cascade illusion,
leaving a dew colour upon the heart.

weaving steams, crimson petals
dance under a light of affectionate
touch, combining spirits glide up stars.



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  • Beautiful-N-Broken gold member
    February 12
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    Ahhh. So very good.

    Terrific write!!

    Keep up the good writing.


  • Jade.Butterfly gold member
    February 3
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    Very nice piece.
    i enjoyed the read.
    Good look and thanks for entering.
    -Mandi