Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Behind My Lips

Behind my lips, like waterfalls
darkly cascading underground,
the words are tumbling freely down
sealed up as if by weathered stone,
but roaring loudly, just the same.

Sealed, because my uncautious breath
might sweep away the preciousness
settled between us on its own.
Because I am just too clumsy
for holding something so precious.

A flower carved of silver dust-
A painting of ink and teardrops-
Only for the eyes a treasure,
or may I dare extend a touch?
Do I dare open up a crack
for the waterfall behind my lips?

Please tell me what you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Rivkah Lynn
    November 5

    Edit | Reply
    You always seem to take my words away, leaving me speechless... you are amazingly talented. Way to write another wonderful and profound poem.