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Till the day i die

Till the day i die
its a risk a chance to take
its my time
to take a chance
take a risk
live my life
im gonna do what i wanna do
no one can stop me
you will remember me
till the day i die
but the pain will always remain
when i die my pain fades away
but i will not lie when i say
you will remember me.

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