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Lord of the Night

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Night falls like a curtain,
waking me from sleep
Darkness clamors with my breath,
time is right to reap

Absconding with their essence,
damning souls to hell
Draining them till they run dry,
I love that crimson smell

Ascending on my victim,
covered in my blackened shroud
I carry out my wicked deed,
of which I am avowed

Death comes as a struggle,
when they learn to serve the night
A member of the clan undead,
not fearful or contrite

Servitude your reasons,
as you harvest darkened dew
Left recoiling from your heinous crimes,
thousands you’ve subdued

Families have been whittled down,
whole towns have been lost
A feeding frenzy in the eve,
mortality the cost

To gently stroke her gorgeous hair,
kiss her on the neck
Leaving them in a sweaty heap,
no one goes unchecked

An army we are building,
for the oncoming Lycan fight
We indoctrinate our soldiers,
from the slightest bite

As the dark lord calls to us,
we heed the battle cry
Be it Lycan or a worthless soul,
by morn they all will die 

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Prompt: Vampires Artwork:Handsome_guy_by_Keun_chulatdeviantart.com (184 words)

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  • wildflower. gold member
    January 30, 2009

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    Whoa, this is haunting and beautiful at the same time. Flawless flow and rhyme, and so detailed in wording that I felt I was there. Bravo! Thank you for entering and good luck!

    ♥ Kathraina


  • UnSpoken...Words...
    January 30, 2009

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    wow this is amazing
    i really enjoyed reading this
    good luck in the contest
    thanks for sharing